Brooksay's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Poison Martini]

i do the same thing

most of the time, at least with one of the two flashes i'm working on currently, i create the story as i go along, which may or may not be a bad idea.

now what you should do is make this longer, splash a little color in there and add a story to why she dirnks, who/what poisioned it....

good luck.

demoninabottle responds:

Yeah, add more meat. But, hell, it was a quick project.

[Random One --Trailer--]

it's your style

for christs sake, you draw well, so why don't you put it to some good use besides the stupid anime characters? be creative and come up with your own facial features besides the pointy nose big eye and hair thing.

it's so overdone, especially the whole "well we're anime characters, and all we ever do is prepare to fight an epic abttle against another anime character then we fight and blahblahabsdkha"

besides your style, which i gave a 0 simply because it's anime and unoriginal, the animation was fairly well, could have been a few more tween frames though.

do something else, add more to it then just a battle, and draw your own face style or something.

idaelmanta responds:

Hey, I still have respect for anime! The bad ones are the ones that you've seen! Endless battles and bland plots... My perception of anime is far from that of yours. I've seen good anime before and I can tell classic from crap. The least I could do for that genre is incorporate some of it to my work. The style I'm trying to make is that of something to remember the good old anime and not crappy hentai and those other 'overdone' ones..

[Super Mario Chemistry]

i didn't vote

i'm kind, i didn't blam, but i have had it up to here *slaps chin with back of hand* with super mario stuff.

Pilex13 responds:

Cmon man, sprite animations are fun!

[PO'ed Chef]

nice stuff

this is one of the better stick toons i've seen, and i laughed out loud at a bunch of parts. it's surprising really.

all my 5 r belong to you.

PBM responds:

Thanks for the review. I appreciate all ur 5zorz!!

[DBZ PinkBlobVSGreenSaiyan]

i hate DBZ stuff

but I'm not biased. I was expecting a really crappy sprite animation when i clicked play but the sprite animations were pretty damn good, that's a plus.

i didn't have time to read your captions which lead me to not following the brief storyline you developed but I got the point.

thinks you can do to improve are maybe make or replicate some more action sprites to give the fights a little more variety, and maybe have your characters launch high into the air and have those crazy flight fight sequences.

other then that it was good. keep up the work.

swordflip responds:

tnx. hey, atleast u watchd d movie before making a review. some guys just read its a sprite thing then vote zero w/o even wtching it

[Good Idea; Bad Idea Part2]

pretty good

pretty good for your first released flash. i approve. 3/5 for you.

one thing you could have done was make the bass boat chair a different color, it was hard to tell what was the guys leg or part of the chair for a second, maybe give the seagull a frame with his wings down. everything else was good.

Seanathen responds:

thank you

[Pissed Off and Armed]

you probably hear this a lot

but it's a little too much like madness combat, but i really like what you did with it, and it's obvious you put a lot of work into it as well.

Tome89 responds:

You're right. I'm having a hard time disproving to all the idiots who think this is a Madness rip.

Thanks, MBrookSay